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i have a research project due mon. & i need to have an opening paragraph and a closing para.
i have everything in between though.
can you help me write them?!
pleeeaaaassssseee?!?!
here it isss,
Chinese medicines
Acupuncture is an ancient form of medicine that rooted back eight thousand years from the Taoist tradition. There are ‘nine needles’ used in the practice of acupuncture, each having its own purpose. Initially, the needles were made from bronze, gold, and silver; however, the majority of them are now made from stainless steel. The needles are placed in the acupuncture points which run in different channels each system in the body. Acupuncture points are described as a spot on the body that influences the vital flow of energy through the body.
Herbal medicines has been used in China for cure or many diseases and conditions. Herbs were used for three uses: treat diseases, heal illnesses, and maintain daily life. There are over 300 kinds of herbs that are used commonly. Herbs are known to be safer and more gentle than chemical medicine. Herbs do not have side effects. Herbs used to be taken by tea. Due to the unpleasant smells and taste, people are now more commonly using tablets. More people are now choosing taking medical with herbs than with the chemicals because they are more natural.
Tunia also known as anmo is another type of medical treatment. “Tunia” means “pushing (and) grasping” in modern Chinese. The term “anmo” was used instead of tunia until the Ming dynasty. During a exaction of the Ma Wang Dui tomb (dated 168 BC), medical texts and silk scrolls and bamboo strips were found. There were many of the early anmo techniques on them. The Huangdi Nei Jing is the earliest surviving text of early Chinese medicine. There is information treatment for various disorders and relationships between anmo and acupuncture. Tunia has developed over many dynasties. The Tang often prescribed it for disease prevention. The Song dynasty began to use it for bone fractures and dislocations. The Ming dynasty began pediatric massages. The Qing dynasty is when prominence of folk-art arose and tunia was used for it. Ranges of conditions treated by anmo has expanded to include most branches of medicine in our modern world.
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Hi,
I am Chinese…hope this helps…
Starting paragraph is a preview of the main paragraphs you already wrote.
There are many types of ancient Chinese medical treatments. Three popular ones are acupuncture, herbal medicine, and tunia. Overtime, Chinese people have practiced these types of remedies for hundreds of years through many different dynasties. Today, the Chinese and many people all over the world have adopted these treatments and believe they cure illnesses.
Ending paragraph sums up everything
As time changed and evolved into the modern medicinal world, professional people have become experts by using acupuncture, herbs and other types of Chinese traditions that have been used for decades. Many people believe Medical Doctors over drug patients and now people have turned to other methods of treatments and practices that are less toxic on the body. People are looking for natural ways to cure ailments and Chinese people have shared ancient Chinese secrets!
Feel free to change anything but it will give you an idea to start!
Hey Girly! I know your tired and desperate, but you should really write it yourself. Just take a break, relax, eat a snack, and write it when you feel less stressed!
For the intro: give background on topic
Conclusion: restate important points made in essay
opening para-
Chinese medicine has come a long way ’till today. Have you ever heard of Acupuncture, Herbal medicines or Tunia? Well these medical techniques are very old. even though technology is improved the methods are still used today and it’s very relaxing and has imidiate affect on a person.
closing para-
So now you know the miracles of Chinese medicines. Thanks to them it’s easy to get cured fast on illness of stress and gets your body soothed out. Like I said these were discovered many dynasties ago and it’s and miracle they still work today, some of the theraphies are even better than modern medicine.
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Introduction:
You may also want to add a proper thesis to the end of this paragraph.
Through time, the people of Asia have used many kinds of remedies and performed different practices to ease tensions in the body and lessen stress, but most of all relieve pain which may range from headaches to body aches and Arthritis. Herbal medicines, “Tunia”, and Acupuncture are some of the many practices that may be used today to alleviate the aches and pains of people today.
Since i really don’t know what the thesis of your paper is, i really can’t write a proper conclusion, but I hope this will get you started.
*EDIT* DO NOT, i repeat, DO NOT USE THE FOLLOWING IN A PAPER: I, You, They, We, etc. It is not considered proper in a research paper. I myself and writing a 5-page term paper and got points taken off my rough draft for using “you”.